Thursday, December 13, 2018
'Comparing poems about identity Essay\r'
'In this essay I entrust be comparing two poems ab come on identity-ââ¬Å"Presents from my Aunts in Pakistanââ¬Â by Moniza Alvi and ââ¬Å" cheat Landscapeââ¬Â by R.S. doubting doubting doubting Thomas.\r\nââ¬Å" cheat Landscapeââ¬Â was written in approximately 1963. Itââ¬â¢s a poem of dismay; Thomas is heroic ab surface what is drop deading to his rustic. Although he has an obvious relish for his country, in ââ¬Å"Welsh Landscapeââ¬Â this is almost mystical by Thomasââ¬â¢s beliefings of bitterness and frustration at whatââ¬â¢s happened to the once infamous landscape, floor and language of Wales. Thomas wishes that Wales would just affect front and embrace its heroic olden, besides in his look this just isnââ¬â¢t happening.\r\nââ¬Å"Presents from my Aunts in Pakistanââ¬Â was written in the late 20th century. Itââ¬â¢s also a poem of despair- still in a different way. Thirteen-year-old Moniza Alvi isnââ¬â¢t unwarranted, but sheââ¬â¢s uncomfort competent where she is and wishes that she could receive in. Sheââ¬â¢d give anything for that. She wishes desperately that she could feel more at home and ordinary in Britain, where sheââ¬â¢s lived lots all her life, but she send packingââ¬â¢t. She canââ¬â¢t reconcile her two cultivations-Pakistani and English-and sheââ¬â¢s confused and swage about this. Moniza Alvi wonders why she canââ¬â¢t fit in and feels utterly trapped. This is kindred Thomasââ¬â¢s poem; he feels that his country is trapped amongst two cultures-English and Welsh-too. Both Alvi and Thomas feel that theyââ¬â¢ve alone lost their identities.\r\nBoth poets explore their culture in these poems. Theyââ¬â¢re both proud of many aspects of their cultures, but feel that a lot needs to be done to enable them to live in their base world.\r\nRS Thomas seems angry. He talks about how in Wales you ââ¬Å"cannot live in the presentââ¬Â and how thereââ¬â¢s ââ¬Å"only the past ââ¬Â. Heââ¬â¢s angry that that over the years, the Wales he knows and loved has crumbled away. It could fool been avoided.\r\nThomas directly addresses his reader when he comments that ââ¬Å"You cannot live in the presentââ¬Â. Here, heââ¬â¢s saying that this is the equivalent for everybody in Wales; itââ¬â¢s unavoidable.\r\nAlthough you can tell that Thomas is proud of his culture (he talks about the ââ¬Å" upright riversââ¬Â and the ââ¬Å"soft consonantsââ¬Â) he believes that a more negative atmosphere has now interpreted over his country. He believes that Wales should remain purely Welsh, and anybody who defies that is ââ¬Å"inbreedingââ¬Â.\r\nOverall, I think that RS Thomas is trying to say that we should appreciate Wales but be conscious of its violent past and try to move on from that-instead of being trapped between the past and present. At the moment, people just arenââ¬â¢t miserable on.\r\nMoniza Alvi, on the other hand, feels lost. Sheâ⠬â¢s confused. She longs to be able to wear her ââ¬Å"glisteningââ¬Â, ââ¬Å"satin-silkenââ¬Â, ââ¬Å"embossedââ¬Â clothing, but canââ¬â¢t fee comfortable in them. ââ¬Å"My attire clung to me and I was aflame,ââ¬Â she says. ââ¬Å"Aflameââ¬Â implies that when she wears these clothes, she feels embarrassed and angry that she doesnââ¬â¢t look right. ââ¬Å"Costumeââ¬Â suggests that these donââ¬â¢t feel like her ordinary clothes; itââ¬â¢s like sheââ¬â¢s trying to be something that sheââ¬â¢s not.\r\nHowever, although she longs for ââ¬Å"denim and corduroyââ¬Â (ordinary, plain British clothes) she doesnââ¬â¢t learn them with anywhere near as much enthusiasm. Theyââ¬â¢re plain, even if they are comfortable, and here we see that Moniza Alvi is once more torn between her two cultures. Sheââ¬â¢s jealous of her Aunt Jamila, who can ââ¬Å"Rise up out of its fire, half Englishââ¬Â. She feels that she canââ¬â¢t do this at all. She sim ply wants to be accepted for who she is. She loves her Pakistani clothing-it looks ââ¬Å"radiantââ¬Â in her wardrobe-but on her, it just doesnââ¬â¢t look right. She talks about her motherââ¬â¢s ââ¬Å"cherishedââ¬Â jewellery which was stolen from her car. The jewellery, like her, was stolen from its roots-now itââ¬â¢ll never be cherished in the same way again.\r\nShe and so goes on to discuss the ââ¬Å"camel-skinââ¬Â lamp. Just like her, the camel-skin lamp has been taken out of its own culture and put someplace else. She says that she considers its ââ¬Å"crueltyââ¬Â-we see here that the lamp is a fable for herself. She feels that she has been treated cruelly when she was taken out of her culture and put somewhere else-and sheââ¬â¢s having difficult dealing with it.\r\nEver since she left Pakistan, sheââ¬â¢s felt out of place. On the journey to England, Moniza Alvi says that ââ¬Å"prickly heat had me shriek on the wayââ¬Â-her trek to England ev en started away on the wrong foot. She ââ¬Å"ended up in a cotââ¬Â-this implies that as soon as she arrived in England she was completely trapped. She then immediately ââ¬Å" set up myself alone, playing with a tin boatââ¬Â. She;s already lost, and the tin boat insinuates that she already wants to barter back home. She just wants to feel right where she is; she doesnââ¬â¢t have an identity. Here, we see a contrast between the two poems that Iââ¬â¢m studying-brittle as it is, at least RS Thomas has an identity.\r\nThe mood throughout ââ¬Å"Welsh landscapeââ¬Â is that of frustration. RS Thomas is irritated because he sees the strength in Wales-ââ¬Å"the constant noisy tractorââ¬Â and the ââ¬Å"hum of the mechanismââ¬Â which implies that work in Wales is indeed moving forward. He sees the beauty of Wales in the ââ¬Å"immaculateââ¬Â rivers and the ââ¬Å"wildââ¬Â sky, but is angry that people arenââ¬â¢t willing to oblige this beauty in other aspe cts of Wales-the ââ¬Å"wind bitten towers and castlesââ¬Â and, ââ¬Å"mouldering quarries and minesââ¬Â.\r\nHeââ¬â¢s frustrated that people arenââ¬â¢t maintaining the areas that his country has always been famous for. He feels that heââ¬â¢s been affected unnecessarily-if the Welsh people did what in his eyeball are their duties, he wouldnââ¬â¢t be in this situation. Heââ¬â¢s extremely aggravated that this has been allowed to happen and that Walesââ¬â¢ reputation and condition is continuing to deteriorate. Heââ¬â¢s worried that eventually, Wales wonââ¬â¢t even have its ââ¬Å"soft consonantsââ¬Â and, ââ¬Å"wind-bitten towers and castlesââ¬Â to its name-theyââ¬â¢ll be allowed to die out.\r\n'
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